每日一篇英语(英语每日一练)

Hi！我看了你的日记，内容很好，只是一些语法读起来有些不顺，［原文］，（我帮你改的）。建议你可以多读一些短故事，不要死背英文书里的句子／语法，因为组成英语句子有几千种方法，建议灵活运用，同时也能增加你对英语的兴趣。 I'm Sally. I worked as a customer service in a software company. [The] (My)job is so busy every day. I [need] (have) to sit in front of the computerand reply to my [costomer's] (customer’s) problem [ceaselessly](好像没有这个词？建议换成 hourly 小时的). [I don't know this job is good or not] (你说的是“我不知道这份工作好不好”建议换成 I’m not sure if this jobsuits me 我不确定这份工作适不适合我) but I hope I can [learn more things] from it （learn what？试举例说明＋学到的好处）.I usually spend the weekend withsome friends. [We have a lot of activities such as shopping, singing ortravelling.] (I usually spend the weekend shopping with some friends, we also haveother activities such as singing and travelling.) I feel so [frotunate] (fortunate)[bacause] (because) they are in my side (always by my side).Whether my work or life I have been trying, and I hope (that) our future will be better. 希望我的回答帮可以帮助你！加油！：）
逐句改了，也许不能与你原意完全吻合 I'm Sally.I am working in a software company as a customer service.你现在还在这个公司工作，不应该用过去时态 The job is a very busy one,I have to sit in front of computer anwsering all my cumtomers and trying to help them with their problems for all day long. I don't really like this job but I hope I can learn something from it.根据你的意思做了些修改 Usually I will spend the whole weekend with my friends.We will go shooping,karaoke or even a short distance trip.I love all my friends :)最后一句看不明白…… No matter what have been in my life,the future will always be better.
I'm Sally. I worked as a customer service in a software company. The job is *very* busy every day. I need to sit in front of the computer and reply to my *customers‘ problems incessantly*. I don't know *whether* this job is *suitable for me* or not, but I hope I can learn more from it. I usually spend the *weekends* with *my* friends. We *do* a lot of activities such as shopping, singing or travelling *together *. I feel so *fortunate* bacause they are *by* my side.Whether *it be* work or life, I hope our future *together* will be better. 最后一句话I have been trying您想表达的是？
1,busy 是形容人的，不能说the job is so busy, 应该是 I am very busy... 2,reply 是及物动词，不需要to ，这里说的不好，不能用reply，3, I feel so frotunate bacause they are in my side. 你要说的意思应该是，他们不在这里，我感觉很沮丧吗？ 如果是， I feel so frustrated becausethey are not here. 最后一句一点不懂，前半句语法肯定不对。。 英语太中国式了，建议多看欧美电影！ 希望采纳，thanks~~
首先我想说，初学英语就能达到这种水平不错哦~_~ 我就简单地说说改进意见吧 I'm Sally,who worked as a customer counselor(service是服务的意思，不准确)in a software company(定语从句). The job is so busy every day. What I need to do is to sit in front of the computer and reply to my costumer's(拼写) problem ceselessly(主语从句). I don't know this job is good or not, but I hope to benefit from it and polish up my skills.(较高级一点的表达) When holidays are at hand, (更生动的表达)I usually spend time with some friends. We have a lot of activities such as shopping, singing or travelling. I feel so fortunate(拼写) bacause they are on my side(与……一起应该是on). Whatever my work or life I have been trying for, I hope our future will be better.(and应该连接两个句子，而你写的是一个不能成为句子的状语)

1. Today, I want to say something about learn English. about 是介词，后面加动词要是ing形式2.Two weeks have passed I'm not sure my English level improve.这是两个句子，中间要逗号隔开，后句加and; 或者直接句号分两句I'm not sure my English level improve. my english level 是单数形式，后面动词也应为单数,即 improves. 或者改为has improved或者你也可以把这个句子写成：I‘m not sure whether my english has improved or not. （我不确定我的英语是否提高了）3.My diarys have some funny mistakes because of my poor English.diary 的复数形式是diaries, 去y变ies.一般主语是物的时候，表示“有”，不用have/has, 通常用 there be 句型如： There are some mistakes in my diaries because of my poor English. 4.I really appreciate your help of corrected the mistakes.of 介词，同1， + doingappreciate 后面加for比较合适，为了什么而感谢。整句可以改成： I really appreciate your help for correcting the mistakes.或者写成 It's highly appreciated that if you could help me to correct the mistakes.5. Maybe watch English movies is a good idea.动词短语 做主语，要用ing 形式，maybe是副词Maybe watching English movies is a good idea.6.Could you recommend a few movies to study English?a few 改为any 比较符合语境a few 表示，很少，几乎没有的意思 我觉得看些 迪斯尼的动画片对于初学者来说是很不错的，卡通片英语比较简单，清晰。可以尝试下
Today, I want to say something about learningEnglish. Two weeks have passed , butI'm not sure my English level has been improved.There are some funny mistakes in my diariesbecause of my poor English(表示”某处有某物“用there be句型，而不是用have来表达）. I really appreciate your help of correcting the mistakes.And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend a few movies to study English?从你的一些重复错误中看出一些问题，其中一点：介词后面接动词的话用动词的ing形式。 我最喜欢的电影之一《海上钢琴师》————推荐
Today, I want to say something about learning English.Two weeks have passed , I'm not sure whether my English level has improved or not. There are some funny mistakes in my diries because of my poor English. I will really appreciate it if you can help me tocorrect these mistakes.And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watchingEnglish movies is a good idea. Could you recommendsome movies about studyingEnglish? 【阿甘正传】
Today, I want to say something about learningEnglish. I'm not sure weather my English have been improved a littleor not even if i havestudied hard fortwo weeks. sometimes my diarys have some stupidmistakes because of my poor English. I really appreciate thatyou help me correcte these mistakes.And I will try harder to study English. Maybe watching English movies is a good idea. Could you recommend a few movies to study English?电影《劫车》《小鬼当家1，2》《加菲猫》

1、如果你想表达的是为明天的饮食制定了一份计划，那我建议这样表达：So I drew up a plan for my tomorrow's diet. 或So I made a plan for my tomorrow's diet. “制定一个计划”可用：draw up a plan或make a plan“明天的饮食”应用：tomorrow's diet，因为如果你把tomorrow放在句末，那前面的时态就应该用将来时（will fix），而不应该用过去式。另外fix主要是修理的意思，用在制定计划不是很合适哦 2、你日记所表达的是明天的计划，所以不应用过去时态，应将Kept改为Keep
时态问题要注意，tomorrow要用将来时，fixed,kept都是动词的过去式。你要注意区分动词的形式。 fixed改成fix，kept改成keep
Will fixed; noddles;

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有的，我用的是角斗士我爱背单词9软件，很好用，可以跟读的，还可以循环播放，单词、拼读、解释、例句都能朗读，可以设定格式的。还有就是可以循环记忆，智能安排复习，不会的单词会重复出现直到会了为止，词库很全，还能自建词库。十大品牌角斗士系列的，北大老师制作的，(注意一定是角斗士系列的flyenglish)，淘宝就有的你去看看。

写的不错... 按照你的思路给你更改如下 This is Monday, a very busy day.Not only pages of forms need to be finished, but also a lot of questions are waiting to be ansered from my customers (这个是客户你确定？如果是想说老师的话 用 master`s).No one can help me, because everyone is busy as well.Thanks god (这个非常口语 不能用于书面语 你非要用吗？推荐说法如下)I felt so tired when the whole works were finished. I just want to go home now, lying on my bed is my whole wish.
such a busy day（感觉这个说起来跟舒服，呵呵，仅供参考呀） answerhelpseveryone is busythank godcomes go home
answer because everyone is busy too 写的不错 用了从句，还有很多固定搭配 坚持 每日一文